tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5333195446221975875.post9000362244875385170..comments2023-04-03T13:13:37.552+01:00Comments on Xyzo's writing corner: Story: War in the South, Chapter 4Petr Janeckahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08357429997430515388noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5333195446221975875.post-48697040730252077792011-07-05T18:41:07.274+01:002011-07-05T18:41:07.274+01:00ThanksThanksPetr Janeckahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08357429997430515388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5333195446221975875.post-49089933798557219812011-07-01T15:29:57.107+01:002011-07-01T15:29:57.107+01:00"He's not going to run very far anyway&qu..."He's not going to run very far anyway" -- good way to end it; keep the reader wanting more. And congrats on meeting your June W1S1 goals. We're halfway there!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com